Cadaqués
Silver, blue, black,
water, moon, skin.
Two fish without scales;
drops of milky light.
Leaping -
for joy, for freedom.
They will not dance for you
for you paint with blood.
Wednesday 3 February 2010
Poem in progress
Cadaqués
Silver, blue, black,
water, moon, skin.
Two fish without scales;
drops of milky light.
Leaping -
for joy, for freedom.
They will not dance for you
for you paint with blood.
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Great- will have to borrow the dvd sometime. Not quite sure about the last line- maybe it doesn't need the word for?
Hmm dunno, I quite like the repetition of "for you", but will leave it alone for a bit and come back, maybe watch the film again. Hopefully if you watch the film you won't be possessed by Lorca or Dali like you were by Rilke!
Glad you liked it anyway :)
only a suggestion but yes I like th epoem a lot.
word veri is suntrol either a scandinavian rock entity or the lastest designer drug
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Erm that's what Marwood thinks of it!
Surely Suntrol couldn't exist as that's what kills them? Definitely a drug.
Marwood-haha! I thought it was some new fangled symbolic blogspeak.
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